诗词：西贝（悉尼）；摄影：颜廷壮 （美国）

      清平乐~晚霞

 霞飞云涌， 渐远风相送。锦瑟尽头谁与共？流彩漫天如梦。    寂静暮霭余辉，杉林春去秋回。守望一生一世，天苍树老如归。

Poet: Xi-bei (Sydney);

Photographer: Yan ting-zhuang (America)

Tune: Pure Serene Musi: Sunset-glow

The white clouds in rosy air are shifting away

With the gentle wind, dripping the elaborate -colors.

In unseen ends with them who would meet luckily?

Only could see and imagine sky-high the curled dreams.

Calmly the evening glow holds the china firs

While transforming the spring into autumn and whose souls

Watching and caring each other become a song without words,

Satisfied in silence as the young-sky yet as the old-trees.

 (Translated by jinsheng for the poem and colored- photo)

[语法注释]

1、    Sunset glow: evening glow. 晚霞，

2、elaborate –colors：非人间的色彩；

3、unseen- end： 隐形的， 看不见的；

4、In unseen ends with them who would meet luckily? 这是一句倒装句，可以还原为：who would meet with them luckily in unseen ends?

“them” 代替了前面一句中的主语“The white clouds”，这是一种拟人的修辞法。天边等待流云的也以“人称”-who 代替。而发问的是诗人，她的感概是下一句：

Only could see and imagine sky-high the curled dreams. 但隐去了人称代词。

5、sky-high the curled dreams：the dreams of curled clouds sky high: 流彩漫天如梦;

6、china fir:常绿乔木；

7、Watching and caring each other： 现在分词短语作限制性后置定语，修饰前面的主语“whose souls”,

8、a song without words：一首无言的歌；

9、Satisfied in silence as the young-sky yet as the old-trees. 分词短语作伴随状语。

译者附言： 诚挚感谢悉尼文友西贝女士赐予她所在的“南开大学七九数学微信群”中的绮丽诗文与摄影并茂的唱和，允我将这美不胜收的意境纳入【英译墨宝】，在此也一并谢过西贝女士的校友们,并欢迎指正。