冬天了，活力消
一切静悄悄，唯风吟              
水成冰，山峦映碧空              

树上鸟儿去，花儿无人捧              
天气变得越发冷              
唯爱烈焰腾

Love in winter

Winter has arrived, vitality was gone
Everything remained silent, only wind sang
Water chilled into ice, mountains bared by shine

Trees lost their birds, and flowers lost their hands
The temperature was  lower and lower to become
But the Love went warmer and warmer into flame

 在中国的一家《诗歌评论》的第七期有朋友对这首小诗进行了正面评论。故转发至澳华文学网，敬请指正。